<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" standalone="yes"?><oembed><version><![CDATA[1.0]]></version><provider_name><![CDATA[West Des Moines Community Schools Technology]]></provider_name><provider_url><![CDATA[https://wdmtech.wordpress.com]]></provider_url><author_name><![CDATA[Brian Abeling]]></author_name><author_url><![CDATA[https://wdmtech.wordpress.com/author/wdmtech/]]></author_url><title><![CDATA[Using Audacity to improve&nbsp;writing]]></title><type><![CDATA[link]]></type><html><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg"><img loading="lazy" data-attachment-id="3133" data-permalink="https://wdmtech.wordpress.com/2013/02/18/audacity/dscn0326/" data-orig-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg" data-orig-size="4320,3240" data-comments-opened="1" data-image-meta="{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;3.2&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;COOLPIX S4100&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;-62169984000&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;4.6&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;200&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0.033333333333333&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;}" data-image-title="DSCN0326" data-image-description="" data-image-caption="" data-medium-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=300" data-large-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=1024" class="alignright size-medium wp-image-3133" alt="DSCN0326" src="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=300&#038;h=225" width="300" height="225" srcset="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=300&amp;h=225 300w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=600&amp;h=450 600w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0326.jpg?w=150&amp;h=113 150w" sizes="(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px" /></a>Students in Kerry Bootsma&#8217;s 8th grade English classes at Stilwell Junior High have been using Audacity to edit and improve their written essays. <a href="http://audacity.sourceforge.net/">Audacity </a>is a free software program for recording sound.  After drafting their essay, students read and record their essay at the computer.  Then they play the recording back and by hearing themselves read their own writing aloud, students are able to listen to the flow of their writing and make changes in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.</p>
<p>Here is some feedback from students:</p>
<blockquote><p><strong><span style="line-height:1.714285714;font-size:1rem;">&#8220;Hearing myself say the sentences pointed out some errors.  I shrunk a huge sentence into smaller ones, and I realized some things I had just didn&#8217;t make sense.&#8221;</span></strong></p>
<p><strong>&#8220;I thought it was really helpful because when you read it in your head you skip over words and only say what you meant to in your head.  But when you have to read it out loud, you actually have to look at the words.&#8221;</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg"><img loading="lazy" data-attachment-id="3134" data-permalink="https://wdmtech.wordpress.com/2013/02/18/audacity/dscn0336/" data-orig-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg" data-orig-size="3240,4320" data-comments-opened="1" data-image-meta="{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;3.9&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;COOLPIX S4100&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;-62169984000&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;6.7&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;250&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0.033333333333333&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;}" data-image-title="DSCN0336" data-image-description="" data-image-caption="" data-medium-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=225" data-large-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=768" class=" wp-image-3134 alignnone" alt="DSCN0336" src="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=180&#038;h=240" width="180" height="240" srcset="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=180&amp;h=240 180w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=360&amp;h=480 360w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=113&amp;h=150 113w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0336.jpg?w=225&amp;h=300 225w" sizes="(max-width: 180px) 100vw, 180px" /></a>&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;.<a href="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg"><img loading="lazy" data-attachment-id="3135" data-permalink="https://wdmtech.wordpress.com/2013/02/18/audacity/dscn0338/" data-orig-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg" data-orig-size="3240,4320" data-comments-opened="1" data-image-meta="{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;6.3&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;COOLPIX S4100&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;-62169984000&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;15.4&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;400&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0.066666666666667&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;}" data-image-title="DSCN0338" data-image-description="" data-image-caption="" data-medium-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=225" data-large-file="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=768" class=" wp-image-3135 alignnone" alt="DSCN0338" src="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=180&#038;h=240" width="180" height="240" srcset="https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=180&amp;h=240 180w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=360&amp;h=480 360w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=113&amp;h=150 113w, https://wdmtech.files.wordpress.com/2013/02/dscn0338.jpg?w=225&amp;h=300 225w" sizes="(max-width: 180px) 100vw, 180px" /></a></p></blockquote>
<p>Kerry Bootsma<br />
7th Grade English Teacher<br />
Stilwell Junior High<br />
bootsmak@wdmcs.org<br />
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